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Critique Clinic – October 21-October 23, 2011

October 21, 2011

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

NOTE: We had a couple of people submitting cards to last week’s Clinic after it was closed. Those posts have been deleted, and I sent a message to the artists. Please post submissions ONLY on Friday, Saturday and Sunday when the Clinic is open. I date every Clinic post – make sure you submit to the right one, or your post will not be seen. Thanks!

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

20 Comments leave one →
  1. cameranut64's avatar
    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      October 21, 2011 4:17 pm

      The colors seem a bit harsh to me, and the red text can’t be seen on the green background. I’m also wondering if you need a snowman as well as the airplane. You might do better to make the space for the photo somewhat bigger – the focus of these kind of cards should be the photo, not the background or other elements.

      Corrie

      • cameranut64's avatar
        October 21, 2011 6:00 pm

        The red text is only a place holder and will be changed by the purchaser, I prefer to have more relating to Christmas/winter on the card. Thank you for your comments.

        Terry

    • Doreen/Salon of Art's avatar
      October 22, 2011 3:45 am

      Hi Terry – I have to agree with Corrie on both counts. The airplane in the little santa hat is so cute it doesn’t stand out with the snowman. There is a lack of balance which causes the eye to go back and forth between the snowman and the airplane when the viewer’s eyes should be go from the airplane to the photo.

      Secondly, we understand that the red text is placeholder, but its good to keep in mind when creating text on custom cards to make the text using the BEST font, BEST size and BEST color choice to match your design. Most customers will not think when seeing the card in the marketplace that they can modify to that degree. Placeholder or not, if it’s not legible or not appealing, it won’t draw customers.

      • cameranut64's avatar
        October 22, 2011 1:45 pm

        I will try to make a second version of the card using you Corrie’s suggestions.

        Thank you, Terry

  2. Rhonda's avatar
    October 21, 2011 4:38 pm

    One of those artists was me. I apologize. I got there from the GCU community newsletter, which I received yesterday. Anyway, I’m back and here’s my card: http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/holiday-cards/christmas-cards/toys/merry-christmas-and-happy-new-730875?aid=144512

    I have received 62 viewings since posting it a year ago and no sales. Thanks for your critique Corrie. 🙂

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      October 21, 2011 5:55 pm

      I think maybe if you tweaked your inside verse, Rhonda – something like “Have a Beary Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year” might have a little more oomph.

      Corrie

    • Doreen/Salon of Art's avatar
      October 22, 2011 2:51 pm

      Hi Rhonda – What a cute couple of Teddy’s! In my opinion, Corrie hit it on the head. Generally speaking, repeating something on the front of the card as your inside verse is not likely to get many sales. Just come up with something else to say inside I I’ll be you’ll have a few sales.

      Also be sure to add a 2nd category of Holidays >>Christmas >> Animals / Pets >>Bears to give it more exposure.

  3. T.A.Paxton's avatar
    October 21, 2011 4:54 pm

    Here is one http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/holiday-cards/christmas-cards/happy-holidays/bichon-frise-dog-teddy-534460?aid=138640

    I also have a Valentine version, the valentine one sells at Zazzle on a shirt and seems more popular than the Christmas version. So I’m wondering how I might fine tune it.

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      October 21, 2011 6:04 pm

      I think the green background might be a tad harsh, and perhaps there’s not enough contrast with your string of Christmas lights. Also, in the inside verse, Christmas should be capitalized. You may want to correct that.

      Corrie

      • T.A.Paxton's avatar
        October 23, 2011 4:11 pm

        Thanks. I’ve tweaked the background but I’m still not sure about the color. I’ve also added a piece of candy under each paw. Do you think it makes it better or worse?

  4. Donna Collins's avatar
    October 22, 2011 6:55 am

    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/anniversary-wedding-cards/for-spouse-general/general/anniversary-darling-872307?aid=156115

    This is a new card I just submitted….I like simple Illustrations, but was wondering if this was to simple… I like to illustrate fun cards. This card was painted in photoshop…. It’s my very first card to paint in Photoshop..Anyway, can you critique it ?

    Donna Collins

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      October 22, 2011 7:05 am

      The illustration is okay. I think your composition needs a little tweaking. If you can bring the people up a bit, and the text down a bit so the composition as a whole is more centered, that may look better. You don’t want the sentiment appearing detached from the illustration.

      Corrie

      • Donna Collins's avatar
        October 22, 2011 5:02 pm

        O.K.. I’ll do that…thank’s so much….I just had another card approved that I did in Photoshop. It’s a Christmas Card.. Will have you critique that one next week….. It was also a special order for a customer which I have in my private gallery….She loved it, but is waiting for me to put a few more cards in my private gallery for her, so that she can order them..
        Thanks for Critiquing my cards..It really helps.
        Donna Collins

  5. Doreen/Salon of Art's avatar
    October 22, 2011 2:57 pm

    I ditto Corrie – but wanted to say Congratulations on having great success the first time painting in Photoshop! I love the illustration Donna!

  6. Donna Collins's avatar
    October 22, 2011 5:23 pm

    http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/anniversary-wedding-cards/for-spouse-general/general/anniversary-darling-872307

    Corrie, here it is….. I made image more up front and font smaller… I hope it’s o.k. to ask if this is better.
    Thanks,
    Donna Collins

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      October 22, 2011 5:36 pm

      I don’t think the font needs to be smaller… you need to bring the text and the image closer together and more centered on the card front.

      Corrie

  7. Donna Collins's avatar
    October 22, 2011 7:02 pm

    http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/anniversary-wedding-cards/for-spouse-general/general/anniversary-darling-872307

    Corrie,
    Here it is centered…It does look better, but what about my copyright name? It is alright where it is..Thanks for helping me..Did I center it right with font it? Is font to small? Please let me know …This helps me so much in making future cards..

    Donna Collins

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