Critique Clinic – December 2-4, 2011

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Hi Corrie,
Ahhh finally found some time to dedicate to my cards. Christmas is NOT a good time to relocate. Anyway, THANK YOU to I think it was Dorine? and thank you for the opportunity to post in this clinic. This card: http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/community/gcu_product.asp?pid=469089&return=/community/my_cards.asp since I took the advice and tweaked it, it increased the sales of this card. It was selling before…but it’s selling even more. 866 clicks and 20 sales.
http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/community/gcu_product.asp?pid=688795&return=/community/my_cards.asp this card has had 260 clicks and one sale : ( I have a series of them and some have sold better than others. Any suggestions???
Thanks in advance and Merry Christmas!
Caryn
Hi Caryn,
Here is the correct link to your card. When posting a link to a card you want to go to your Storefront and grab the Text Sell Me link or URL at the top of the page rather than posting a link from your Manage Cards page 🙂
http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/for-my-husband-at-christmas-688795?pid=688795&gcu=43045123714