Critique Clinic – December 9-11, 2011

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Here is a design I had for a Valentine and changed it also into a Birthday Card… Not sure if it’s to plain…It’s seems lately I’m going more plain on my cards… Thanks for critiquing….
http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/humor-birthday-cards/face-it-happy-birthday-885205?aid=156115
Donna Conns
I don’t think the card is too plain, but the text on the front… I’m finding it odd. The slanted text doesn’t work, and looks messy. Also, I think you might do better to say, “Awwww… come on and face it.” Putting that “and” sounds nicer to the ear.
Corrie
Thank’s Corrie..I will add “and”……Should I make the text go across the top?
Donna
If I were you, I would because there’s nothing in the design to echo a curve or slant, so it doesn’t fit. Straight across is better.
Corrie, I made the change on my illustration and I’m going to change the card in my store right now…… Thanks.
Donna
Here is a card for Christmas, I like the image but not sure about the rest.
http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/holiday-cards/christmas-cards/christmas-trees-lights/christmas-wishes-snowman-and-tree-836823?aid=151407
I can’t really speak to the image, as I’m not a photographer. For the rest… I think the green background is kind of flat, and doesn’t do a thing for the photo. Not sure what you can do about it, though. Try red? Or a fresher green?
Hi Cathy,
I agree with Corrie on the border, the green does nothing for the photograph or for me personally. White might even be better. As for the photograph, what bothers me is the window and building behind the scene. The vertical blinds in the window are quite distracting and draw my eyes away from the scene. If it were my photograph I would isolate the holiday scene by removing the window and building behind it, crop it tighter (if you can) and I might even add a slight snowfall layer to the overall scene to add to the feeling.