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Critique Clinic – September 9-11, 2011

September 9, 2011

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card’s details page at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

18 Comments leave one →
  1. Donna Collins's avatar
    September 9, 2011 8:24 am

    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/-Happy+Halloween+with+Frankinstein-greeting+card-837813?aid=156115

    Not sure if I posted this one…I need to keep track of the one I send…..anyway is this Halloween to grey.
    Donna

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      September 9, 2011 8:31 am

      I like the idea – the Frankenstein figure is cute, and the hanging spiders are a nice touch – however I do find the gray background kind of… well… gray. It doesn’t stand out for me, and because Frankenstein’s shirt is also gray, it’s very much of a muchness. Maybe change the background to make more contrast? Other Halloween colors are orange, poisonous green and purple.

      Corrie

      • Donna Collins's avatar
        September 9, 2011 5:10 pm

        Will do…thanks Corrie… I’ve been trying to work on a lot of my designs and making a few changes … it just takes time…Thanks so much for taking the time to critique… really appreciated.
        Donna

  2. Dragonfire Graphics's avatar
    September 9, 2011 6:21 pm

    Hi, here is an entry for today. I have so many people that love this here at home and it gets lots of clicks but no sales. I am off to work now so will not be able to reply right away. Thanks. Happy Friday~
    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/-Happy+Birthday+Old+Age+Humorous+Harlequin+Great+Dane-greeting+card-825096?aid=145102

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      September 9, 2011 6:50 pm

      I love the dog, however I think your background is way too busy. It’s so busy the dog is disappearing. You might have better luck putting the dog on a white background, and the text in solid red.

      Corrie

      • Dragonfire Graphics's avatar
        September 10, 2011 2:14 pm

        Corrie, I took your sage advice and you were right on the mark. Love this version! Thanks as always!

    • CindyJ's avatar
      September 11, 2011 1:56 am

      I love your new version, too, Betsy! 🙂 I didn’t see it before you changed it, but it looks excellent now! 🙂

  3. Donna Collins's avatar
    September 10, 2011 1:00 am

    Hi Corrie ,
    I just wanted to show you my change on the Halloween Card.

    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/-Happy+Halloween+with+Frankinstein-greeting+card-837813

    • Donna Collins's avatar
      September 10, 2011 1:15 am

      O.K. I changed his shirt to green…don’t know why I put blue…green is so much better..it should show up later corrected…it’s still blue..

  4. Donna Collins's avatar
    September 10, 2011 1:02 am

    I’m sure the grey image will soon be taken off.. It’s still comes up with all the cards, but when you click on the grey Halloween Image itself the new color one comes up..which I like… Thanks…
    Donna…

  5. GCUAdmin's avatar
    September 10, 2011 5:46 am

    It’s better now that you’ve put some color into the background and changed the monster’s shirt. BTW, I didn’t see it before, but its spelled Frankenstein, not Frankinstein (unless you did that spelling for a reason).

    Corrie

    • Donna Collins's avatar
      September 11, 2011 3:01 am

      Corrie , thanks… I’ll check my spelling….I like the color too…Green shirt … orange background… Thanks.

  6. Dragonfire Graphics's avatar
    September 10, 2011 2:21 pm

    Hi again, my facebook link doesn’t seem to work. I posted the new version on my blog, the changes on GCU are not showing up yet.

    https://dragonfiregraphics.wordpress.com/

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      September 10, 2011 4:09 pm

      I think the new version is much cleaner, so the focus is on the dog, hence on the joke – well done!

      Corrie

  7. CindyJ's avatar
    September 11, 2011 2:07 am

    Here is a card I created recently. I liked it at the time, but now I’m wondering if there’s anything I should do to improve it?

    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/-Happy+10th+Birthday+-+Hope+Its+a+Brilliant+Blast-greeting+card-855787?aid=152495

    Thanks!
    Cindy

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