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Critique Clinic – January 20-22, 2012

January 20, 2012

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or a new design you’d like advice on, give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, etc.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

10 Comments leave one →
  1. Donna Collins's avatar
    January 20, 2012 4:28 pm

    Here’s another card that I made into a Valentine for mom with a few changes, adding hearts and a red bow on mouse….I sometimes like to curve my font and was wondering if this is balanced with the font being curved…

    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/holiday-cards/valentines-day-cards/mom-mother/general-mom-mother/cat-with-a-mouse-for-892846?aid=156115

    Thanks,
    Donna Collins

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      January 20, 2012 7:34 pm

      To be honest, Donna, I’d straighten out the text since there’s really no need for it.

      Corrie

      • Donna Collins's avatar
        January 21, 2012 6:08 am

        Thanks Corrie,
        I’ll make the changes…the more I look at it your right… I wonder why I have that curvie feeling to make curves on some of my font…

        Donna

  2. Gerda with Send2smiles's avatar
    January 20, 2012 7:31 pm

    Hello everyone,…
    might be odd, I received a Design of the Day for this one http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/for-friend-birthday-cards/general/holy-moly-friend-mole-birthday-841246 but I never actually sold one single card with this design. Made me think I should change the wording,…or something???
    Any suggestion appreciated. Thank you. Gerda

    • GCUAdmin's avatar
      January 20, 2012 7:35 pm

      Gerda, people like text inside the card, too. Maybe add some humorous inside text like, “I really dig you!”

      Corrie

    • Donna Collins's avatar
      January 21, 2012 6:10 am

      Cute card too…

      Donna

  3. Gerda with Send2smiles's avatar
    January 20, 2012 9:15 pm

    Thanks Corrie, yes the inside text is a good point. no idea, why I didnt’t think of that. thanks so much. Gerda

  4. CindyJ's avatar
    January 21, 2012 4:42 am

    Hello… here’s a card I made just today for the new Chinese Year of the Dragon humor category:

    http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/holiday-cards/chinese-new-year-cards/2012-year-of-the-dragon/humor/greeting-card-896661

    It was approved, but I may have been in too much of a hurry. It’s not hilarious, but the image might draw a giggle or two. Can you see anything that could/should be improved? 🙂

    P.S. I got that Chinese character on the front from Wikipedia. It should be the character for dragon. 🙂 Any input from folks who know for sure, would also be appreciated. 🙂

    Thanks!!
    Cindy

  5. GCUAdmin's avatar
    January 21, 2012 6:49 am

    Hi Cindy! The dragon’s cute, BUT if I were you, I’d remove the 2012 from the title and the inside. Chinese New Year is Monday, January 23, so you’re very late for sales this year. However, Year of the Dragon will come along again in 2024.

    Corrie

    • CindyJ's avatar
      January 22, 2012 3:48 am

      Thanks Corrie! I will definitely change it and submit it to a couple of the other Chinese categories over the next couple of days (and maybe some birthday categories). Today got really busy & I didn’t have a chance to do much with greeting cards. :-/

      Thanks again,
      Cindy

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