Critique Clinic – January 27-29, 2012

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or a new design you’d like advice on. Just give us a link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, etc.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Hi Corrie and Everybody!
Here’s one that I made yesterday (kind of late for a Valentine this year, but it’ll be ready for next year).
http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/greeting-card-898793/?aid=152495
My hubby and son said they thought it was kind of hard to read, so I figure if I need to make changes – I can do so before it gets to the reviewer (with the hopes it will reach the level of a ‘virtually perfect submission’ ) 🙂
Also, I didn’t use the word ‘military’ in there anywhere (other than in the Artist’s Notes). Will I get dinged by the reviewer for that, or does the concept make it clear enough?
Thanks!
Cindy
Hi Cindy!
I agree with your husband and son – the word “Heroes” on the front is almost impossible to read. If you’re going to decorate a font like that, you need a fatter one in a very plain text style that will allow for graphics inside the letters and still be readable.
If you had put this card in a “Military” Valentine’s category (is there such a thing?) you’d probably get the card returned because an “American hero” isn’t the same as specific soldier, sailor, Marine, etc. I can’t see what category it’s in right now – GCU is being temperamental.
Corrie
Thanks Corrie!
Sorry I didn’t mention what categories I had put this card in (and the link I gave you is to the card in my private gallery – so that wouldn’t tell you much, duh. Lol!). Here are the 2 categories, but I will be changing things based on your comments (which I REALLY appreciate!), hopefully in time so the reviewer doesn’t have to return it to me for edits. 😉
Collections » Patriotic » United States / U.S.
Holidays » Valentine’s Day » Occupation Specific » Armed Forces / Military Service
Thanks again! 🙂
Cindy
Happy Sunday Everyone, I would like to submit this card for critique. It has quite a few hits and I did have 3 sales right off the bat but none since. I am wondering if it needs to have something referring to retirement on the front. I don’t know. As I write this it occurs to me this could be used as an old age humor birthday card or a get well. The wheels are suddenly turning! Anyway, just wondering if it needs something.
as a p.s. this is cropped from my 87 year old Mom’s kindergarten photo in East Orange, NJ.
Hey, Betsy, we need a link so we can see your card.
Corrie
Wow, back to the coffee pot for me I guess!
http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/collections/vintage-nostalgia-retro/happy-retirement-from-the-whole-854936?aid=145102&f=1
Okay, well… maybe it’s just me, but I kind of find it odd that a retirement card has children on it. I like the photo, though. If you could rework that as a humorous birthday card, that would work well.
Corrie
Thanks Corrie, I never thought of that! Back to the drawing board.