Critique Clinic – May 12-13, 2012

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, etc.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Here is a new design I submitted that I hope to create a series of name specific birthday cards for boys with. Please let me know what you think, and also, once the initial design is approved, do I then have to wait for approval for each new name submitted, if that name on the front is the only change to the cards? How does that all work? Here’s the link:
Thanks for any help, John 🙂
Hi John, fun design! I’ll pass on what I’m doing just as food for thought with your ‘name’ cards. When, like this, the name itself is not drawn and colored by me making it unique to any font . . . but instead the customer could add whatever name they like there through personalization, I make one for each letter of the alphabet YET MAKE THEM PERSONALIZED.
So here’s what you get a personalized card in each of the 26 letter specific categories to ensure the card will be found, so Allan for A, Brian for B, etc… This way not only does the artist only need to make 26 cards to cover the names, but our customers browsing the site don’t see hundreds of the same design with different names.
Just what I’m doing these days 🙂 Good luck with your cool card!
Hi John! Yes, I’d say the design works for the intended purpose. You will have to submit each card individually and wait for them all to be reviewed, I’m afraid. Don’t forget to make an additional card so customers can personalize the front, too.
Corrie
Thanks Corrie and Doreen! I think I will go with the design for each letter of the alphabet and then have them customizable as well to cover all other names out there!!
Here is the link to the inside copy for this design:
Thanks again, John
O.K. here is new design…I have another verse I am going to submit today with this design. Outside will say: (Memories are forever ) and inside will say: ( Remembering all the fun times we shared together.
I just love red hair and I am also finding that I love keeping my designs simple by leaving background out or just a little…oh well, I’m having fun….
Critique me Corrie….. thanks….
http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/miss-you-cards/friend/greeting-card-920126?aid=156115
Donna, the design looks fine to me – since your elements (the girls) are so detailed, putting a background on the card would just be a distraction. Sticking to simple white is the best choice.
Corrie
Thank you so much Corrie….I thought the same thing…a lot of background would take away from the gals….
Donna
Corrie, I have a question. How did you get your square illustration logo up on the side? Salon art has one and the Village Greetings too.. I just have an orange pattern.
Thanks,
Donna
Hi Donna . . . if you like, all you have to do is click on your ‘square logo’ here in WP, it will take you to a screen where you can create a free WP account where you’ll be able to create a profile here and upload your avatar. Since you can use the WP login on many blogs you visit to leave a comment, it has further advantages to join.
Because my blog is hosted by WordPress, I had an opportunity to enter a graphic into Gravatar, which WP uses to generate the squares. Not sure how to do it if you’re not on WP, though.
Corrie