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Critique Clinic – June 15-17, 2012

June 15, 2012

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a recently submitted card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • We will take an unlimited number of artists, including those who have submitted recently, HOWEVER I reserve the right to close a clinic for the day if the submissions become overwhelming. If the clinic has been closed, and you submit a card, your comment will be deleted.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, etc.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

8 Comments leave one →
  1. Tracie's avatar
    June 15, 2012 10:54 am

    Hello! I haven’t had a free day on Friday in a while. I’ve been going through my old cards and this one needs help. I also see things wrong with the Artist Notes, but haven’t fixed them yet. http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/collections/animals-pets/butterflies-caterpillars-moths/thinking-of-you-if-819489?aid=152843

    • Doreen Erhardt's avatar
      June 15, 2012 3:22 pm

      Hi Tracie – I agree with Corrie’s suggestion about changing the color of the text to black – I also would experiment with the font and arrangement of the text to see if something like these styles might not give the front a bit more of a draw . . .423435 or 166486 or 929736. Varying the font on the front (tastefully) could be just what this card needs.

      I will also suggest that you separate the inside verse lines a bit so that it makes you pause before your mind reads everyone rather than every one. So maybe something like “If my thoughts were butterflies and you were a flower . . .

      Every one would land on you.

  2. GCUAdmin's avatar
    June 15, 2012 11:41 am

    I like the composition and the card itself is nice. If I were you, I’d change the text from burgundy to black – it would suit the photograph and background much better. And be sure to capitalize the “Y” in You. As far as the artist’s notes, shouldn’t it be “Holly Blue butterfly?”

    Corrie

    • Tracie's avatar
      June 15, 2012 5:48 pm

      Thank you both for the help. Now to go do some editing 😀

  3. Tracie's avatar
    June 18, 2012 12:58 am

    I’ve been working on this card, and for some reason cannot find a font I like. Here’s a before and after of what I have so far…I removed the dark patch in the background and brightened up the shadowy part of the butterfly wings too…Can anyone suggest a font that would fit better than this?
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    (it’s still Sunday here :))

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