Critique Clinic – November 8-10, 2013

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be intended for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on before submission. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, Tinypic, etc. If you do give a private gallery link, be sure your private module gallery is ON. Please do not post links to your Manage Cards section – do you really want strangers tinkering with your cards? And please don’t ask us to critique a card that’s pending review – we can’t see it until it’s approved.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Hello, I’m considering submitting this card to GCU and would appreciate your critique.
Thank you.
This appears to be exactly the same photograph you submitted last week, Susan. Do you have a GCU store? If so, please provide a link otherwise, this is starting to look like a weird kind of spam.
Corrie
Corrie, when I click on the above link, the correct photo appears. It’s totally different from last week’s. Also, I deleted last week’s photo from my Flickr account beforehand. I do have a GCU store, but the photo is not there because I haven’t submitted it yet. So I’m sending you a link through your GCU artist page, hoping that will work. Thank you for your patience.
Okay, my bad … I checked the link from last week and saw the exact same photograph. I didn’t know you’d deleted the old photo.
Corrie
I’m not a photographer, so I can’t really give you a technical review. I will say that as an observer, the colors in the beach picture appear to be kind of washed out to me. I like the composition, though. What kind of card were you thinking of creating with this photo?
Corrie
Hi Susan,
As a professional photographer, I’m going to tell you what I see and what I would work on if this were my own photo and I wished to turn it into a greeting card.
* First the weeds in the foreground on the left are distracting and ugly. I would clone those out.
* Next, there is an overall lack of good tonal values and color saturation so I would work in those areas, being careful to not lighten the whites in the waves any more than they already are or you’ll blow out those highlights.
This post might be helpful to you: https://gcucommunity.com/2013/11/04/dash-of-inspiration-getting-the-most-out-of-photographs/
I hope that this was helpful 🙂
Doreen
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I had a sympathy card in mind. The scene looks a little desolate, yet spiritual to me.