Critique Clinic – June 14-16, 2013

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.
THE RULES
- ONE card per artist only.
- Card must be intended for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
- To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on before submission. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, Tinypic, etc. If you do give a private gallery link, be sure your private module gallery is ON. Please do not post links to your Manage Cards section – do you really want strangers tinkering with your cards? And please don’t ask us to critique a card that’s pending review – we can’t see it until it’s approved.
- Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
- I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
- Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
- Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
- You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
- Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?
So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!


Hi everyone. The following card has had more than 2,800 clicks but no sales, so, obviously, something is not right, particularly internally. All suggestions gratefully received.
http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/weve-moved-new-address-announcements/new-apartment-condo/weve-moved-to-our-new-851499?aid=132497
Cheers,
Rosanne
I don’t see anything technically wrong with the card – maybe the photographers might give you some pointers. Font choice is pretty clean and legible. Perhaps people don’t send out “we’ve moved” cards as much these days because of e-mail and texting?
Corrie
Thanks Corrie – I always appreciate your opinion. You may well be right that “we’ve moved” cards may not be so popular anymore.
Cheers,
Rosanne
Hi Rosanne – We’ve moved cards for new homes certainly still sell, however it is possible that moving announcements for a new apartment have be less sought after. The image itself is probably drawing customers in to take a look at a larger view, but they they see it’s for New Apartment, so they don’t buy.
Doreen
Thanks Doreen – I did wonder about that too. However, I just wanted to check that the card itself was not the issue.
Cheers,
Rosanne
Just my personal opinion – but I wouldn’t be concerned with the design vs. number of clicks.
I don’t even look at the number of clicks anymore do to a regen error on the web site in the not so distant past. I received over 2,000 clicks in a 24 hour time period on 2 cards in particular. I used to pay attention to the clicks and from a stat point of view it used to be a good indicator, but I just choose not to pay attention to them anymore. Clicks can rise in quantity for any number of reasons – special promotions, email campaigns, design of the day, etc. . . Just adding my 2 cents or rather clicks 🙂
Thanks SunAtNight – yes, clicks certainly used to be quite reliable. Still, it’s always worth checking whether there is another problem that I actually have control over! 🙂
Cheers,
Rosanne