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Critique Clinic – January 3-5, 2014

January 3, 2014

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be intended for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on before submission. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, Tinypic, etc. If you do give a private gallery link, be sure your private module gallery is ON. Please do not post links to your Manage Cards section – do you really want strangers tinkering with your cards? And please don’t ask us to critique a card that’s pending review – we can’t see it until it’s approved.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

9 Comments leave one →
  1. Kati Cheldelin's avatar
    Kati Cheldelin permalink
    January 3, 2014 12:18 pm

    Hello Everyone – This custom name teen birthday card for girl has been pre-approved, but I thought I would run it through the clinic for some additional input.
    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/13th-birthday-cards/13th-birthday-polka-dots-custom-1205530
    First question – Should I use the word splendiferous in the verse? When I was making the card, I asked my teen granddaughter and some of her friends about using this word. They thought it was great. However, after thinking about it, I wondered if it is wise to use it because the majority of the customers who would view the card would be adults and they might think it a bit of a superfluous word. (I probably spend way too much time on verse, but have found that my cards often sell better when I do spend that time.)
    Second question – What can I do with the image to give it more depth? I’ve been trying to keep my finger off the bevel and emboss button.
    Would appreciate any other input.
    Thanks, Kati

  2. GCUAdmin's avatar
    January 3, 2014 12:44 pm

    Okay, first do not under any circumstances surrender to the lure of emboss/bevel. The effect is ugly and doesn’t print well on cards at all.

    If you’re going for framed text on a background, making your background busier works well, since the defined field for the text is white, so it makes for good contrast. This would, of course, require you to redo the card design, so that’s your call.

    As for splendiferous … yes, it’s okay as a generic text. Is there any word play you can use to tie in the polka dot theme to the inside verse? Like “spotted,” “dotty,” “saving a spot” or something like that. Integrating verse relevant to the card design attracts shoppers.

    Good luck!

    Corrie

  3. Salon of Art's avatar
    January 3, 2014 4:18 pm

    Great design Kati and what a super idea to get some more input to make it the best it can be. I love Corrie’s suggestion and of course am in total agreement about the bevel option.

    My suggestion would be to see if you like it with a bold outline around the numbers, maybe even black for a little punch. I’m often pleasantly surprised how a little black ‘stroke’ can pull text/numbers off the background. If that’s too much, you might try making your shadow a bit more pronounced and see if that works for you.

    Good luck!

    Doreen

  4. Kati Cheldelin's avatar
    Kati Cheldelin permalink
    January 3, 2014 9:31 pm

    Thanks Corrie and Doreen. I darkened the shadows, added a shadow to the frame and changed the verse using spotted instead of filled. What do you think? I think I need to cogitate a bit more on verse.

    I really appreciate the GCU Community Blog. Your influence on this image includes color (these are from the new 1914 Pantone colors) and tag frame (used from Delicious Scraps that was referenced here). I read every post and gain something from every category.

    You Are Splendiferous!
    Kati

  5. Kati Cheldelin's avatar
    Kati Cheldelin permalink
    January 3, 2014 9:33 pm

    Ups! I forgot to add the link.
    http://artist.greetingcarduniverse.com/13th-birthday-cards/13th-birthday-polka-dots-custom-1205530
    Kati

  6. GCUAdmin's avatar
    January 4, 2014 6:21 am

    The shadow’s very subtle, which is good. That should print fine. And the darker outline does make the frame stand out a bit more. As for the verse, maybe “dotted” would work better than “spotted?” I’m thinking of teenagers and pimples! 🙂

    We’re glad you find the Community blog a helpful resource. That’s what we’re here for.

    Corrie

  7. Sherry's avatar
    January 4, 2014 7:07 am

    I know you said you needed help with the image, which looks fine to me, but I thought maybe the inside might sound better broken into two sentences. It’s of course your call.

    Hope your thirteenth birthday is special, like you are. That it’s dotted with fun, magical moments and lots of laughter. Sherry

  8. Ginger's avatar
    January 5, 2014 2:55 pm

    I like the changes to the front of card. Thinking of the verse, what about using the words “spot on”?
    Hope your 13th year is as special as you are
    and is spot on with fun, magical moments, and lots of laughter.

  9. Kati Cheldelin's avatar
    Kati Cheldelin permalink
    January 7, 2014 5:53 am

    Thanks everyone! I decided to go with dotted.

    Happy Day!
    Kati

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