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Critique Clinic – January 31-February 2, 2014

January 31, 2014

How does it work? For three days a week (Friday-Sunday midnight), I will open the clinic to any artist who wants an honest peer review and critique of a card which gets plenty of clicks but no sales, so something’s probably not quite right, or you’ve got a new design you want to test drive, or you’re unsure about the marketability of a card. Or perhaps you’re a newbie who isn’t sure if a card is up to a marketable standard. Anyone is welcome to participate. In fact, I encourage everyone to at least look at the cards in question and read the critique comments – you may learn something. The purpose of the clinic is to help artists improve the commercial appeal and marketability of their cards.

THE RULES

  • ONE card per artist only.
  • Card must be intended for sale at Greeting Card Universe.
  • To submit a card for critique, post a link to the card at GCU in the comments section of this clinic post. Allowances will be made if you’ve had a card declined, or made a new design you’d like advice on before submission. Give us the link where we can see the card, such as your private gallery, Flickr, Tinypic, etc. If you do give a private gallery link, be sure your private module gallery is ON. Please do not post links to your Manage Cards section – do you really want strangers tinkering with your cards? And please don’t ask us to critique a card that’s pending review – we can’t see it until it’s approved.
  • Any artist is free to comment and/or give a critique of a submitted card. HOWEVER, post-and-run comments like “great card” or “you suck” will not be tolerated, nor will abuse. Criticism should be constructive, not destructive. Play nice or you will be banned.
  • I also won’t tolerate temper tantrums if you decide your “artistic integrity” is being stepped on because you asked for a critique, and someone told you the photo you’re using isn’t in focus. If you can’t take honest criticism, don’t submit. Once gets you a warning; twice and you’re banned from submitting in the future.
  • Artists who critique may do so by giving their opinion, posting an example of another card, or pointing the submitter to a video, on-line article, or other helpful suggestion.
  • Don’t forget that artists who are giving you tips and helpful advice are volunteering their time and trouble. Be nice. A link back to their store on your website or blog is appreciated (but not mandatory).
  • You are free not to take any advice offered. There’s no guarantee any card will be a bestseller, so don’t come into the clinic with unrealistic expectations.
  • Rules may change as we go along and we see how things turn out, okay?

So without any further ado, I declare this week’s Critique Clinic open!

8 Comments leave one →
  1. Jan Keteleer's avatar
    January 31, 2014 9:21 am

    Hi, I need some advice for my new adult series. As mentioned before I am making cards for the adult series because there are not many. So till now I’ve submitted birthday cards based on “old” existing material while I was busy to create new material inspired by the pin up cards of the late fifties. I’m now ready to create cards with this new material, you can see some material in preview at http://janke.photoshelter.com/gallery/Pin-Up/G00000vYpQBtsvcg/
    (note these aren’t cards yet)
    To market them as many as possible I want to make series of them (different relations, ages) and here I need advice.

    As an example I submitted a Holidays card to my private gallery. http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/collections/adult-sexy/greeting-card-1225422?aid=234320

    My questions: What are the right categories for this card? I think it is Collections » Adult / Sexy
    Holidays » New Year’s » Adult / Sexy (or is the use of the mistletoe more in use for Christmas in the US?)
    Can I submit it also in a more relation specific category and if the female/male pin up is addressing a message to a relation of the same gender do I have to put it in a gay/lesbian category?

    Any advice is more than welcome and please feel free to criticize the images and give tips to make them more marketable.

    These are new images and as usual another person sees things the designer doesn’t see anymore 🙂

    Thanks in advance.

    link to the card: http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/collections/adult-sexy/greeting-card-1225422?aid=234320

    link to other images (not cards) http://janke.photoshelter.com/gallery/Pin-Up/G00000vYpQBtsvcg/

    • Robert of Reel Cards's avatar
      January 31, 2014 10:26 pm

      Hey Jan – These look OK – I’ll assume they are 3D models rendered in 3D Studio Max or Maya? From an anatomy point of view the proportions seem a bit off – like in the ‘Babs Present’ – the leg furthest from us is longer and bigger than the one closer to us – and her arm looks very long – remember the forearm is as big as large as your foot (try it on yourself) – and the upper arm is shorter than the forearm. If you can I’d say giver her a hairstyle…think of a real Photo shoot and what kind of story are you trying to tell. Just my .02 – take it or leave it 🙂

  2. GCUAdmin's avatar
    January 31, 2014 11:04 am

    Okay, I’ll try to answer all your questions.

    I believe Collections Adult/Sexy and Holidays – Christmas – Adult/Sexy would be the correct categories (in the US, mistletoe is Christmas related rather than New Year’s). I’m not sure, since the image contains nudity, if it would be allowed in the relationship specific category.

    For a gay/lesbian card, you’ll want to use the Gay/Lesbian category instead of the Adult/Sexy.

    That’s what I think I’d do with that kind of image. However, my advice is to use the Fast Track pre-approval option first. The reviewer will let you know if a category isn’t correct, that way you won’t get a bunch of returns. See here for details:

    Tips and Tricks: Pre-Approval for Card Series with Fast Track

    Corrie

  3. Jan Keteleer's avatar
    January 31, 2014 11:13 am

    Thanks Corrie

  4. Doreen/Salon of Art's avatar
    January 31, 2014 3:38 pm

    Fun card imagery Jan and very tastefully done. The only thing I can add is to make sure when you create the Concept Series 1st Card that you ask whether that specific image can also be used to created relationship specific cards and whether they go in the ‘standard’ categories. If not and you plan several series of relation-specific Adult themed cards for Christmas, then GCU may decide to add a “Relation Specific” sub-category for you.
    Doreen
    http://www.SalonOfArt.com
    http://www.facebook.com/salonofart
    http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/SalonOfArt

    • Jan Keteleer's avatar
      January 31, 2014 5:00 pm

      Thanks Doreen, I will submit this first card and ask the review team if it is possible that I create relation specific cards with it. And yes, I’m planning to do a lot of series with this kind of imagery not only for Christmas but several categories. I have studied the categories well and see that there are plenty holiday, invitation and occasion categories with an adult sub-category containing few cards. (25 to be exact)

      Have a nice weekend, (here in Belgium it is already evening )

      Jan

      ps: It is good that I’ve asked about the use of mistletoe, here it is used at New Years Eve.

  5. Robert of Reel Cards's avatar
    January 31, 2014 10:18 pm

    Here’s one of the newer cards – lots more to come and any advice is welcome- thanks: http://www.greetingcarduniverse.com/collections/illustrations/easter-hat-origins-1207840?aid=136464

  6. GCUAdmin's avatar
    February 1, 2014 6:27 am

    It’s a cute idea, Robert. I like the illustration, I’m just unsure of the text. It took me a second to get the joke because I had “moa” in my head rather than Easter Island, and I didn’t make the Easter bonnet connection. Maybe tweak the punchline?

    Corrie

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